Zakimations's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[-No name brand-]

Great song

I think your drums could be a lot more interesting. Needs to be louder too. But all in all, this song works very well. Nice work.

[The End of all thingz]

Pretty Badass

Dig this shit man, keep it up

[Arie]

Hell yeah

Rounded out to almost perfection

G-vegas responds:

I agree with you. The only thing I would've changed was that weak bassline. I got a remix somewhere on one of my computers, more dancehall tho. Thx 4 the review!

G-Vegas

[High Roller]

Hip hop.

If this is exactly what you wanted it to sound like than good job, well done. Its a good song as long as you personally feel it is perfect. On the other hand, from a 3rd person view:

The FL hits are definently a hip hop thing, however the synth lead is a little over doing it. Replace it with a mid-bass and that should even things out. make the high channel something less techno-ish and and easier on the ears. High rollin is all about kicking back, and this reminds me of driving a broken down civic past a group of fat chicks and them piling into my trunk only to blow a head-gasket and ultimately labeled a "jive sucka"

It sounds like the same thing looped over and over.

PM me and tell me what you think I should vote on this, i'm not sure.

G-vegas responds:

This was not one of my best efforts, I'll admit that. It's fair and constructive criticism, and i appreciate that. It is a loop, but it was not made for NG which is why it's so long and repetitive. Ty tho

[B.F.D.]

Yea

Hey I never hear any cool solos outta you. Am I just not listening hard enough?

Cool song keep it up like I know you will.

[Angry Ballad]

Well

I can see that you have the basic idea. FL Slayer is very unforfilling though when it comes to making rock / metal riffs with it. Try putting the bass punch behind it even if it is the same thing it will give it the sound it needs. Even putting a drawn out "choir" from the FL synth will give it some attitude. keep it up. You can do it, I know you can.

[The Bass Twik]

Good and all

Not full enough, you have your low bass kick, your mid synth riff, but where is the high?

3/5

[tapedeck forest]

Haha

I'm writing this review as i listen to it.

Cool intro. I'm a big fan of ambient intros.

This is unique, wow.

Good definition of different segments in the song.

I like the way the riff changes every time I expect it to. it flows well.

I love choppy synth.

Sweet dude 5/5

[Electronika]

Cool

Personally I'm not into the whole trance thing so I'm not one to really judge but from what experience I have about production music:

Seems like the whole song sounded the same, didn't really have a pickup until about 1:40 and even then it was pretty much the same. Try harder to have different segments in the song and make people go "wow, that part kicked ass."

3/5

ChroniMC responds:

This goes to both of you, I really do hate people that judge a genre they dislike.
It's electronica for gods sake. Its supposed to be the same until 1:40 its called BUILD UP.
I am just going to stop posting music on NG because its useless it seems most of the people here revolve around hard metal, rock, hip hop or misc genres, its pathetic.

Both of you are pathetic, and thats just plain honesty. Do me one favor, please for future posters of techno, house, or trance - just dont vote... its not your thing, leave it for those who's it is. Neither of your reviews were helpful. There aren't supposed to be many peaks, there is supposed to be the same sound for quite some time before it changes in any technophobic genre. Wow.

[(::Flying Down To Shadows::)]

Works well

Good song man, keep it up!

FatKidWitAJetPak responds:

Cool, I will. =)